this is good, I love that all the colors are official lipstick colors. I think you should find ome better shots of actual lips, they are so "Cover Girl" --Marilyn is perfect, what about Angelina, or someone famous for over-plump lips, and there are dozens of funny vintage clipart ladies, maybe pin-ups?
I do appreciate the cropping of the images -nice. the thing you should do immediately though:
you have such simple elements (short words, smooth cylinders, vague spaces, but you've just sort of plunked them down. The three panels should play off of each other, balance, counter-balance, asymmetrical balance. . . think of the 3 panels as a single frame; you can make breathtaking compositions with those humble beginnings.
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this is good, I love that all the colors are official lipstick colors.
I think you should find ome better shots of actual lips, they are so "Cover Girl" --Marilyn is perfect, what about Angelina, or someone famous for over-plump lips, and there are dozens of funny vintage clipart ladies, maybe pin-ups?
I do appreciate the cropping of the images -nice.
the thing you should do immediately though:
you have such simple elements (short words, smooth cylinders, vague spaces, but you've just sort of plunked them down. The three panels should play off of each other, balance, counter-balance, asymmetrical balance. . . think of the 3 panels as a single frame; you can make breathtaking compositions with those humble beginnings.
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