first loose the goopy font. the script and the outline are all you really need. while I like some of your colors, especially the yellows, they seem a little arbitrary. I wonder if the whole thing should be a "symphony in browns"? it's a 'kiss,' what about lips? too much stock photos.
the vectors could be smoother, you still need "a perfect kiss:" http://hartzogfamily.blogspot.com/2007/12/perfect-kiss.html
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first loose the goopy font. the script and the outline are all you really need.
while I like some of your colors, especially the yellows, they seem a little arbitrary. I wonder if the whole thing should be a "symphony in browns"?
it's a 'kiss,' what about lips?
too much stock photos.
the vectors could be smoother, you still need "a perfect kiss:"
http://hartzogfamily.blogspot.com/2007/12/perfect-kiss.html
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